Donna Tartt sure smells good

November 23, 2013 • Posted in Mike Knezovich, Uncategorized, writing by

My husband Mike was at the Greenbuild convention in Philadelphia last week. Left with so much time on my own, I started reading The Goldfinch, Donna Tartt’s new 771-page novel. I had a hard time putting it down, and I wasn’t the only one. In a New York Times book review, Michiko Kakutani says Donna Tartt’s new book “pulls together all her remarkable storytelling talents into a rapturous, symphonic whole and reminds the reader of the immersive, stay-up-all-night pleasures of reading.”

And that I did. Stay up all night to finish it, I mean.Goldfinch

Nothing holds my attention more than a story about grief and bereavement, and this book is full of that. and more. It starts when 13-year-old Theo Decker and his beloved mother find themselves inside the Metropolitan Museum of Art when a terrorist bomb explodes. Theo’s mother dies, and the story takes off to Las Vegas, Amsterdam and then back to Manhattan from there.

I always wait until I’m done reading a book before reading the reviews (don’t want to spoil the plot) and after staying up late Wednesday night to finish The Goldfinch,, I woke up and read the reviews Thursday morning. Brilliant, they said. Dickensian. With all the gushing, though, none of them remembered to compliment the clever ways Donna Tartt weaves the sense of smell into her writing. I mean, sure, her editor at Little, Brown & Company said that Goldfinch readers “never doubt for a second that you’re experiencing something real,” but he neglected to mention how using the sense of smell is one of the best ways to draw readers in. If The Goldfinch had been published before I gave my Smelling is Believing workshop at Northwestern University’s Summer Writers’ Conference last August, I could have used it as a textbook.

Writers often overuse similes when describing odors, aromas and fragrances, but saying something smells like lemon, like chocolate, like rotten eggs, whatever can sound tedious. In The Goldfinch, Donna Tartt’s main character Theo weaves aromas into his descriptions smoothly. Some examples:

  • With his deadbeat Dad in a room in Las Vegas: “The air was overly chilled with a stale, refrigerated smell, sitting motionless for hours. The filament of smoke from his Viceroy floated to the ceiling like a thread of incense.”
  • Waking up in a bedroom near the furniture restoration shop: “Lying very still under the eiderdown, I breathed the dark air of dried out potpourri, and burnt fireplace wood, and, very faint, the evergreen tang of turpentine, resin, and varnish.”
  • Buying flowers to bring to a dinner party: “In the tiny, overheated shop, their fragrance hit me exactly the wrong way, and only at the cash register did I realize why. Their scent was the same sick wholesome sweetness of my mother’s memorial service,”
  • A close-talker startles him with “a gin-crocked blast that almost knocked me over.”
  • A young hip New York City restaurant: “The smells were overwhelming. Wine and garlic. Perfume and sweat. Sizzling platters of lemon grass chicken hurried out of the kitchen.”

Funny. Those examples all focus on the sense of smell, but don’t you just picture yourself in those scenes? Forgive me, I just can’t help myself here, I gotta say it: Donna Tartt’s new book? It smells of success.

Judy Roth On November 23, 2013 at 1:14 pm

I had already downloaded the book onto my ipad for vacation reading next month. I loved Donna Tartt’s “The Secret History” and urge you to read it if you haven’t. After your review I’m more eager than ever to read “The Goldfinch”. I did look up the actual painting. It’s lovely.

Judy Roth

bethfinke On November 24, 2013 at 9:01 am

You know, I haven’t read “The Secret History” yet, but midway through the Goldfinch I downloaded it, too. My friend Nancy recommended The Secret History, too, and hearing how much you liked it makes me even more eager to read that one.

adventuresinlowvision On November 23, 2013 at 3:07 pm

I put this book on my hold list at the library because of all the buzz. Your review about the use of smell makes me more interested to listen to The Goldfinch.

bethfinke On November 24, 2013 at 9:02 am

Glad to hear that — do me a favor and check in again when you’ve finished the book, eager to hear how you like it.

adventuresinlowvision On December 12, 2013 at 12:38 pm

Just checked it out. I’ll let you know when I finish listening!

bethfinke On December 16, 2013 at 10:01 am

Great! Eager to hear how you like it —

adventuresinlowvision On December 17, 2013 at 9:59 am

Ok, finished! 5 stars on the goodreads account. Fantastic writing, enjoyed the different settings and superb narration by David Pittu. I felt like I was there every step of the way. Smelled Xandra’s juicy fruit, everyone’s sour alcohols and cigarettes, the smell of luck–ginseng tea, and I have upgraded my opinion on continental breakfast, at least in Europe! I am curious how Tartt wrote out her dialogue with so many distinct accents. I will seek out an eBook to figure that out.
What other books made you feel like you were there and had a great story like The Goldfinch, Beth?

Cheryl On November 23, 2013 at 3:30 pm

“The Goldfinch” has moved to the top of my list of books to read. I feel we were meant to read this book being that “Finke” is derived from “finch”……771 pages!! That was a long night, “Beth Goldfinch”!

bethfinke On November 24, 2013 at 9:06 am

The “Finch” connection was not lost on me, I am drawn to all things Finch (have even tried a beer with that label, next time we’re together we can pair it with the Flo wine!) And you make me laugh, thinking I read The Goldfinch *all* in one night — remember, Mike was gone all week. The book is 32 hrs and 30 mins long, and now I’ll confess that I did lose interest a bit when it changed locale to Amsterdam. I was listening to the audio version and allowed myself to drift off to sleep for some of that part.

Kelly Zaug On November 23, 2013 at 8:28 pm

I am going to find a way to bring the sense of smell into my work with my 5th grade reading/writing support class! Thank you for pointing those out, Beth.

bethfinke On November 24, 2013 at 9:08 am

My pleasure. And hey, I just remembered: I’m visiting schools on Long Island in March. Email me privately and maybe we can work out a way for me to visit your class, too, while I’m there.

The Empty Pen On November 23, 2013 at 9:00 pm

Those are great examples. You’re always reminding me to add more scents to my writing…guess this is my homework reading!

bethfinke On November 24, 2013 at 9:10 am

Love the double entendre there —

Lois Baron On November 23, 2013 at 10:33 pm

Very interesting, Beth. Think I have to read it. Maybe I can learn something!!

bethfinke On November 24, 2013 at 9:14 am

Oh, Lois, I think you’d especially appreciate the stories about the art world in this book. Do give it a read, and let me know what you think.

Sharon Howerton On November 24, 2013 at 8:15 am

Beth, where did you find this book? It is not on BARD yet. As you probably know, a friend of mine says this author writes a book about every ten years.

Sharon Howerton

bethfinke On November 24, 2013 at 9:22 am

You know, Sharon, I should have included this information right on the post. You’re right, “The Gold finch” is not yet available on BARD, the Library of Congress free service for the blind. I subscribe to audible.com and am allowed one book each month, for November I downloaded “The Gold finch.” The audio book is 32 hrs and 30 mins long, so I considered it a bargain. David Pittu reads it, I’ve never heard of him before but he does an excellent job narrating The book, he had to give voice to a number of quirky characters. I can’t imagine the book being read more perfectly.
1. If the offers are true to their word, you can try audible.com for a free 30-day trial: http://www.audible.com/ricky‎
Getting 32 hours of reading for free would be an excellent buy!

bethfinke On November 24, 2013 at 9:38 am

I just looked up David Pittu for fun, and sounds like he’s well known for his theatre work in New York., Among other things, he wrote the book and lyrics for a play about The Music of Jacob Sterling. He starred in that musical, too, and it was called…”What’s That Smell?”
How’s that for kismet?!

bethfinke On November 25, 2013 at 2:55 pm

…and a friend in NYC says he has been on Law & Order and appears in The Good Wife on TV, too.

Sue Kowalski On November 25, 2013 at 7:51 am

Beth, I loved The Goldfinch too, and I loved the examples you used (that I didn’t really notice at the time I read it) to point out Donna Tartt’s use of “smell imagery”. So…while I’m gushing here, let me just tell you how much I enjoy reading your blog!

bethfinke On November 25, 2013 at 2:58 pm

You’re gushing, and I’m blushing. THANKS Sue. And the fact you didn’t notice Donna Tartt’s references to the sense of smell is just a credit to how well she writes — you don’t notice, it doesn’t stick out, but it draws you into the scene.

Jamie S. On November 25, 2013 at 9:59 am

You did a great job making a summary of the best things we should notice when reading the that book. I think the plot is interesting and i might give it a shot. Thank you.

bethfinke On November 25, 2013 at 2:59 pm

You are welcome.

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